SAD STORIES- HER LAST BREATHE | MAKE YOU CRY | EMOTIONAL

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Some stories are sometimes such beautiful and attachable to us that they put an impact on us by making us emotional. Today I am sharing such a beautiful tale, a sad story, a story that can make you even cry.

"Her Last Breath" originally written by me is the tale of a pet and its owner. A tale that is weaved around an atmosphere of love and care. The beauty of the tale lies in the end and I will not turn it tasteless by revealing the climax of the story.

Since this is the story about a pet dog and if you love pets, I am betting you that this will gonna make you feel every word. I have tried my best to narrate it as beautifully as I can and I wish that may the story put an impact to appreciate my efforts.

STORY: "HER LAST BREATH"

Once I had a dog, named Jack, who was the apple of my wife’s eyes. My wife used to love him a lot, sometimes more than our children Kabir and Srishti. But one day he passed away due to sickness and this creates a mental trauma on her. She cried badly on losing her best buddy. It seemed like she was broken deep inside. She began to stay silent and used to remember him. I tried too much to make let her understand but she always ignored me whenever I tried to say about it. 

So two months after, on our 15th anniversary, I brought a cute, little puppy for her. She turned happy again.  She gave the big smile she always used to give. Seeing her smiling again, I experienced great joy because she was my life and I couldn't saw her like this.

She gave the puppy the same name, Jack. She used to play with him, used to take him out for long walks in the mornings, provide him his favorite food, and whatever it took to make him happy she used to do. Sometimes, I and my children felt jealous of him; and my little daughter, Srishti used to complain to me, “Dad, mamma always play with Jack. She loves him much more than me. And Jack, he also doesn’t play with us but only with mom”, and I always used to tell her that this was not true, she loves us all a lot.

My wife Kavya, was not only a responsible mother but a good wife too. She took care of every member of the family much more than anyone else and also love us all from the core of her heart. She was a nice and good wife and mother and for her, Jack was also one of our family. Yes, it was true that she used to pay attention to Jack much more than us but it was due to her love and care for him. She used to tell me about her fondness for little dogs and puppies from her childhood.

Jack, also love her too much and also had an idea about all her favorite things; especially her love for red flowers. Jack knew that she likes red flowers too much, so on Kavya's every birthday he used to gift her beautiful red flowers that he used to pick by himself. I was amazed to see this intelligence of an animal and wanted to know from where he used to collect them. 

One day I get to know that he used to visit the garden near the temple, pluck the flowers from there, and sometimes the gardener also used to help him, and I was told this all by the same person. The bunch contained some hibiscus and roses and he always used to impress Kavya with such a lovely thing. I remember the first time he gifted the bunch to her, I am unable to describe the joy of hers on receiving it by Jack, as she never expected such a thing. She lifted him in her arms and kissed him. That day Jack jumped with joy and we all were just enjoying this all. From that day he continued this always on her every birthday.

Years passed away, our children have grown up and with them Jack also. Here, I and my wife were turning older and older by day. But still, everything was going on good enough. Jack used to play with us all, and now he turned more responsible and loyal but the bond of strong and forever friendship was still alive only with my wife. Since our children were working, they mostly remain out of the house because of their jobs, and only three of us were left alone in the house.

One day I was out for bringing some vegetables and Kavya was alone in the house with Jack. Suddenly a call from my neighbor, Mrs. Dillon came. She asked me to reach the hospital as soon as possible as Kavya was admitted there. I shocked. I immediately ran towards the hospital.

When I reached the hospital, I came to know that Jack brought Mrs. Dillon to our home where she found Kavya lying on the floor unconsciously, so she immediately called the ambulance and brought her to the hospital.

I went to her and saw her lying on the bed unconsciously. When I asked about her to the doctor, he told me that she was ill and had a high fever. He assured me that she will be fine soon and can be discharged within two days. 

Our both children also arrived till then. When they came to know about her, especially my daughter, she began to cry and my son was near me. Then I asked Mrs. Dillon about Jack, she told me that he was at home and she locked the house from outside. After some time when Kavya came to her senses, she opened her eyes and we get relieved but we had eyes filled with tears. She told us that she didn't know what happen but she fell on the ground suddenly when Jack started barking and she became unconscious till then.

We all were near her, we were nervous but we all were at that time working as a strength for each other. When Srishti went back home, she found Jack on the door, waiting for Kavya to return, and had tears in his eyes. She gave him food to eat but he ignored it. When I came to know this, I also tried to feed him but he didn’t eat properly. 

After two days, Kavya was discharged from the hospital. As we reached the house and as soon as we opened the door, we found Jack waiting for Kavya. As he looked at her, he began to dance with joy, came to her, and start roaming around. 

I never saw him as happy as he was at that time. Kavya was also very happy to meet him after such a long time. She sat down to met her lovely kid and lifted him in her arms and he started licking her with love. 

I told her about Jack's not taking food properly so as soon she went inside the home she asked Shristi to bring food for him and then Kavya feed him with her hands and he immediately finished it. Seeing this we all were amazed, my daughter said with a jealous manner, "Mom's favorite" and we all began to laugh. Then we took Kavya to her room, as the doctor had advised let her rest as she was very weak and was not well. Jack was sitting near her looking at her very keenly the whole time.

Many days were passed away, but there was no improvement in Kavya's health. Jack used to always stay around her, and even if she sneezes a little he used to drag us all to her. My daughter was just unable to understand what Jack was and I was unable to understand this bond of his with her. 

One day when Kavya was sleeping, Jack sitting near her bed suddenly get up and went out. At that time, I was not there. When I came back, I didn’t found Jack anywhere in the house. I sat down near her, she woke up, I gave her the medicines and then we both began to talk with each other. I was talking to her about our past time when suddenly she began to shivering. I immediately called the doctor and he said to reach within 20 minutes.

I was waiting for him to come when my son also arrived. My daughter was putting a wet cloth on her head so that the body temperature drops a little as she was having a high fever. Kavya was continuously asking for Jack and we all didn't know where he had gone. I was waiting for the doctor to arrive as soon as possible. My son was continuously calling him to reach soon.

I went out to see the doctor, I was afraid. My heart was feeling weird, it was beating loud and loud. I had fear inside which I was unable to recognize. Seeing her in such a condition, my eyes were filled with tears. I went to her, sat down near her, and held her hand in mine, she opened her eyes and asked, "Why you are crying?" 

Then she saw Kabir and Shristi, she called them near and hugged them tightly and said, “Don’t be worried dear, I will be alright soon; if something happens to me then promise me that you will take care of your dad and never let him feel alone.” Listening to this they said not to speak such words and they both hugged her then she again asked for Jack, and I had no answer. Then my son, immediately went out to find Jack. 

After some time, I went out of the room and then I saw from the window, Jack running towards the home with the bunch of red roses in his mouth. I was shocked to see him. He came inside and went to her, climbed on the bed, and put those roses near her. My son also came running behind him, my daughter stood up as she saw him and I was at the door. We all were only looking at him and the smile he gave her. Kavya was too much pleased and she began to move her hands over him. Then Jack sit down near her and laid his head over her breast. 

Kavya was happy, she put her hands over him. We all were looking at them with a sad smile on our faces. The moment made us feel a little relaxed. Suddenly the bell rang, my son opens the door, the doctor was there.  He brought him inside, then the doctor asked Kabir to take Jack away. Kabir went to Jack and called him to come but he didn't respond. I asked him to carry Jack and Kabir moved his hand forward to carry him in his lap and when he shook him he didn't give any response. 

He was lying with his head over her, his eyes were closed, it seemed that he was sleeping so the doctor said that he will check her without disturbing Jack and as he touched her hand, he turned toward me and replied, "I am sorry Mr. Madan, she is no more."  Listening to this, I was shocked, I replied, "How could this happen, she was smiling just a moment before and hovering her hands over Jack, he also knows that she is alive how could you say so. Please examine properly."  

I was shocked to know that how could he be stating such, just a moment before she was talking to us all. Both my children were refusing this and asking to examine her properly. The doctor ensured us and then he put his hand over Jack. He looked at Kabir and said silently, "He too is no more". Kabir looked at Jack, I was already in such heavy grief that I didn't listen to what he said to him, when Kabir came to me and hugging me tightly he told with his eyes filled with tears, "Dad, mom took Jack with her."  

I had no words, I was looking at both, my daughter was crying very badly and my son was crying holding me tightly. She closed her eyes for always, and I was unable to understand what to do. I even had no tear in my eyes, I was unable to describe my situation. I was only gazing at Kavya and then I went near them and put a hand on Jack, and felt the distance he made. 

He was dead, dead with Kavya but in her last breath, he gave a smile to us all. He already guessed what was going to happen, but still, he gave what nobody can, a smile on all of our faces, especially on Kavya's, and thus left us all alone went with her, he was a real hero of my and my wife's life, I looked at her and my eyes began to flow with tears.

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